oooooh MY GOODNESS!!! so this what they do in products???for good sales?? EISH!!!! trust me, without talented people like you these product adverts will not make money hahaha
Girl! You have some serious talent!!!! Awesome! I'll give some critique since I'm a print journalism/design major and I design newspaper and yearbook layouts weekly.
The alignment of the text in one paragraph and the other varies. I like the right side's alignment idea, but the left side's alignment is justified in news print style.
That's the only inconsistency, but I love the typography and the color is striking! This is awesome altogether! Do you intern for anyone? I'll keep you in mind since I'm working on a magazine project myself. Great work!